Character

Character Voice

/ˈkærəktər vɔɪs/ noun
IN ONE SENTENCE

The distinct way a specific character speaks and thinks, shaped by their background, personality, and emotional state.

Definition

Character voice is the unique linguistic fingerprint of a fictional person - their word choices, sentence rhythms, slang, verbal tics, and the thoughts they leave unsaid. It goes beyond just dialogue; in a first-person or close-third narrative, character voice colors the entire narration. A retired marine and a nineteen-year-old art student would describe the same sunset in completely different ways, and that difference is character voice at work. When done well, readers should be able to identify who's speaking even without dialogue tags.

Why It Matters

Distinct character voices are one of the fastest ways to make a cast feel real and memorable. If all your characters sound like slightly different versions of you, readers will struggle to tell them apart and the story will feel flat. Strong voice work also does double duty - it reveals personality, education, class, and emotional state without you having to spell any of that out.

Types of Character Voice

Dialogue Voice +
Internal Voice +
Evolved Voice +

Famous Examples

Their Eyes Were Watching God — Zora Neale Hurston

Janie's voice shifts between lyrical internal narration and dialect-rich dialogue, reflecting her dual existence between inner dreams and outer community.

A Clockwork Orange — Anthony Burgess

Alex's invented Nadsat slang creates one of the most distinctive character voices in fiction, immediately immersing readers in his worldview.

Piranesi — Susanna Clarke

Piranesi's earnest, wonder-filled journal voice tells the reader everything about his character before the plot reveals anything.

Common Mistakes

Relying only on dialogue quirks like accents or catchphrases while the narration sounds generic.

Voice should permeate everything - the metaphors a character reaches for, the details they notice, the rhythm of their thoughts. A mechanic thinks in mechanical metaphors. A dancer notices how people move.

Writing dialect so thickly that it becomes unreadable or feels like mockery.

Use a light touch with phonetic spelling. A few well-chosen regional words or speech patterns suggest dialect more effectively than mangled spelling throughout.

All characters sounding identical, especially in ensemble casts.

Create a voice sheet for each major character listing their vocabulary level, sentence length tendency, favorite expressions, and topics they avoid. Then read dialogue aloud to test distinctiveness.

Try It Yourself

Quick Exercise

Write the same two-paragraph scene - a person waiting for test results at a doctor's office - from two different characters' perspectives. One is a nervous teenager, the other a retired surgeon. Don't name their backgrounds directly. Let their voice alone reveal who they are through word choice, thought patterns, and what details they notice in the waiting room.

CONTINUE LEARNING
Writing the Draft
Voice crystallizes during drafting. Let characters find their voice naturally in the first draft, then sharpen and differentiate during revision.