Prose

Stage Business

/steɪdʒ ˈbɪz.nɪs/ noun
IN ONE SENTENCE

Small physical actions characters perform during dialogue or between story beats - fidgeting, pouring a drink, folding laundry - that make scenes feel alive.

Definition

Stage business refers to the minor physical activities characters engage in during a scene, especially during conversations. It's the coffee being stirred, the pen being clicked, the jacket being zipped up. Borrowed from theater, where actors need something to do with their hands, stage business in fiction serves the same grounding purpose - it keeps characters embodied, gives dialogue scenes texture, and often communicates subtext that the words themselves don't carry.

Why It Matters

Stage business is what separates a scene that reads like a screenplay from one that reads like life. When a character methodically tears a napkin into strips while insisting everything is fine, the reader understands what's really happening. These small actions do double duty: they prevent talking-heads syndrome and they reveal character psychology without you having to spell it out.

Types of Stage Business

Nervous Business +
Domestic Business +
Displacement Business +
Habitual Business +

Famous Examples

The Remains of the Day — Kazuo Ishiguro

Stevens constantly busies himself with butler duties - polishing silver, adjusting place settings - while navigating devastating emotional conversations, and the precision of his tasks mirrors his emotional repression.

Raymond Carver's short stories — Raymond Carver

Carver's characters are always doing something with their hands during dialogue - drinking, smoking, handling small objects - and these actions carry the emotional weight his spare dialogue leaves unspoken.

Breaking Bad — Vince Gilligan

Walter White's breakfast scenes use the mundane business of cooking eggs and pouring juice to create unbearable tension when the audience knows what he's hiding.

Common Mistakes

Defaulting to the same business every scene

If every character in every scene sips coffee and nods, your stage business has become wallpaper. Vary the activities and make them specific to the character and situation.

Business that contradicts the emotional tone

A character casually making a sandwich during a life-or-death conversation can work if you're going for dark comedy or detachment. Otherwise, match the business to the emotional temperature.

Inserting business after every line of dialogue

Stage business should punctuate a scene, not smother it. Use it at emotional turning points, during pauses, or when subtext needs a physical vessel. Let some dialogue lines breathe on their own.

Try It Yourself

Quick Exercise

Write the same two-person conversation three times. In the first version, set it at a dinner table and use the food, utensils, and napkins as stage business. In the second, set it during a long car ride and use the driving, the radio, and the window as business. In the third, set it while one character packs a suitcase. Notice how the physical activity changes the rhythm, subtext, and emotional feel of the exact same dialogue.

CONTINUE LEARNING
Writing the Draft
Where you give characters physical lives during dialogue and quiet moments
Revision & Editing
Where you audit stage business for variety, specificity, and emotional resonance