Prose

Blocking

/ˈblɒk.ɪŋ/ noun
IN ONE SENTENCE

The physical movements and positioning of characters within a scene - where they stand, sit, walk, and orient themselves in space.

Definition

Blocking is the choreography of your characters' bodies in space. Borrowed from theater and film, it refers to how characters move through a scene - where they're standing relative to each other, how they cross a room, when they sit or rise, what they're physically doing while speaking or thinking. In fiction, good blocking gives readers a spatial map of the scene and uses physical positioning to reinforce emotional dynamics.

Why It Matters

Without blocking, your scenes happen in a void. Characters become floating voices and disembodied thoughts. But blocking does more than just orient the reader spatially. A character who crosses to the far side of the room during an argument is telling you something. A character who sits when everyone else stands is telling you something. Physical positioning is a storytelling tool, not just a stage direction.

Types of Blocking

Spatial Blocking +
Dynamic Blocking +
Emotional Blocking +

Famous Examples

No Country for Old Men — Cormac McCarthy

McCarthy's scenes are meticulously blocked - you always know exactly where Chigurh is standing relative to his victims, and that physical precision creates unbearable tension.

Pride and Prejudice — Jane Austen

Austen uses ballroom positioning, drawing room seating arrangements, and walking paths to physically choreograph social dynamics and attraction between characters.

The Great Gatsby — F. Scott Fitzgerald

The blocking of Gatsby's parties - who stands where, who watches from across the room, who disappears upstairs - mirrors the social hierarchies and longing at the heart of the novel.

Common Mistakes

Teleporting characters

If a character was sitting at the start of a scene, they can't suddenly be at the window without getting up. Track your characters' positions and move them intentionally.

Blocking only at the start of a scene

Don't establish positions in paragraph one and then let characters become stationary for five pages. People move, shift, fidget. Refresh blocking periodically.

Over-choreographing every movement

You don't need to narrate every step. "She crossed to the window" works. You don't need "She stood up from the chair, turned to her left, walked four steps across the hardwood floor, and arrived at the window."

Ignoring spatial logic

If your scene is set in a small apartment, characters can't be "across the vast room" from each other. Know your space and block within it realistically.

Try It Yourself

Quick Exercise

Pick a two-character dialogue scene from your work. Sketch a quick floor plan of the room on paper. Mark where each character starts. Now rewrite the scene, moving each character at least twice in ways that reflect the emotional arc of the conversation. If they start close and the conversation goes badly, move them apart. If they start distant and find connection, bring them together. Read the original and the revised version back to back.

CONTINUE LEARNING
Writing the Draft
Where you establish the physical choreography of each scene as you write it
Revision & Editing
Where you check for teleporting characters, static scenes, and opportunities to use positioning for subtext