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Red Herring

/rɛd ˈhɛrɪŋ/ noun
IN ONE SENTENCE

A misleading clue or detail that diverts the reader's attention from the real answer, especially common in mystery and thriller writing.

Definition

A red herring is a narrative false lead - a clue, character, or plot detail designed to send the reader (or the characters) in the wrong direction. The name comes from the old idea that smoked herring, which turns red, could be used to throw hunting dogs off a scent trail. In fiction, red herrings create complexity and surprise by making the reader think they have figured things out, only to reveal they were looking at the wrong thing entirely.

Why It Matters

Red herrings keep your readers engaged and humble. They prevent your plot from being too predictable by adding false trails that make the real solution harder to guess. They are essential in mystery and thriller writing, but they work in any genre where you want to surprise the reader. A romance can have a red herring love interest. A fantasy can have a red herring prophecy. The trick is making the misdirection feel fair in retrospect.

Types of Red Herring

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Famous Examples

And Then There Were None — Agatha Christie

Christie was the master of red herrings. In this novel, nearly every character appears guilty at some point, and the real solution is so buried beneath misdirection that most readers never see it coming.

Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban — J.K. Rowling

Sirius Black is set up as a terrifying threat for the entire book - an escaped murderer coming for Harry. The reveal that he is actually an ally, and the real villain is hiding in plain sight as a pet rat, is a classic red herring payoff.

Knives Out — Rian Johnson (film)

Johnson layers multiple red herrings throughout the film, making the audience think they understand the mystery early on, then pulling the rug out repeatedly. The film is also a commentary on how red herrings work in the mystery genre itself.

Common Mistakes

Red herrings that feel like cheating

A red herring should be misleading, not dishonest. When the real answer is revealed, the reader should be able to look back and see that the clues were there all along. If the red herring worked only because you withheld crucial information, it feels unfair.

Forgetting to resolve the red herring

If you set up a suspicious character or mysterious clue as a red herring, the reader still needs to understand what it actually was. An unresolved red herring feels like a plot hole, not a clever misdirection.

Making the real clue too obvious once the red herring is removed

If you strip away the red herring and the answer is immediately obvious, the misdirection was doing too much heavy lifting. The real solution should be satisfying to discover, not simply the only thing left.

Too many red herrings

If everything is a false lead, the reader stops trusting anything you write and checks out. Use red herrings strategically - a few well-placed ones are far more effective than a dozen.

Try It Yourself

Quick Exercise

Write a 600-word mystery scene where three suspects are being questioned about a missing item. Plant one red herring - a detail about one suspect that seems damning but is actually innocent. Give the reader enough information to spot the real culprit if they pay close attention to the right details rather than the obvious ones.

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CONTINUE LEARNING
Planning & Structure
Red herrings need to be planned backward from the reveal. Start with the real answer, then design false trails that lead convincingly in other directions.
Revision & Editing
During revision, have a beta reader tell you when they figured out the solution. If they caught it too early, your red herrings need strengthening. If they felt cheated by the reveal, your real clues need more visibility.