Character

Villain

/ˈvɪl.ən/ noun
IN ONE SENTENCE

A character who actively causes harm or opposes the protagonist through morally wrong actions - the story's source of threat and danger.

Definition

A villain is a character defined by harmful intent, immoral actions, or a willingness to cause suffering in pursuit of their goals. Unlike a general antagonist (who simply opposes the protagonist), a villain carries moral weight - the reader is meant to recognize their behavior as wrong. That said, the best villains aren't cardboard cutouts of evil. They have reasons for what they do, even if those reasons are twisted, selfish, or delusional. A great villain makes the story's stakes feel real because the reader believes they will follow through on their threats.

Why It Matters

Your villain is your story's pressure system. They're the reason your protagonist can't just walk to the finish line. A memorable villain doesn't just create obstacles - they create dread, fascination, and the genuine possibility of failure. The stronger your villain, the more meaningful your protagonist's victory (or defeat) becomes.

Types of Villain

The Mastermind +
The Tyrant +
The Monster +
The Charismatic Villain +
The Ideological Villain +

Famous Examples

Othello — Shakespeare

Iago is literature's masterclass in villainy. He destroys lives through manipulation alone, and his motivations are so petty and murky that scholars still debate what actually drives him.

Misery — Stephen King

Annie Wilkes terrifies because she's ordinary. She's a nurse, a fan, a lonely woman in a farmhouse - and she's capable of unimaginable cruelty delivered with a smile.

A Game of Thrones — George R.R. Martin

Cersei Lannister starts as a scheming queen and evolves into one of fantasy's richest villains. Her fierce love for her children makes her sympathetic even as her cruelty escalates.

The Secret History — Donna Tartt

Henry Winter is a villain wrapped in intellectual glamour. His calm willingness to kill to protect a secret feels chilling precisely because it's so controlled and rational.

Common Mistakes

Writing a villain with no motivation

Even pure evil needs a reason. Power, fear, ideology, trauma, pleasure - give the villain something that drives them. 'They're just evil' is never enough.

Making the villain incompetent

A villain who keeps failing isn't scary. They need wins. Let them hurt the protagonist, outmaneuver them, take something that can't be recovered. Real threat requires real damage.

Overexplaining the villain's backstory

A little mystery goes a long way. You don't need a full trauma timeline to make a villain work. Sometimes the most terrifying thing is not fully understanding why someone does what they do.

Only using the villain at the climax

Your villain should exert pressure throughout the story, even when they're offscreen. Their influence, their agents, or the fear they inspire should be felt in every act.

Try It Yourself

Quick Exercise

Write your villain's origin moment - the single scene where they decided the world works differently than everyone thinks. Keep it under 400 words. The goal isn't to make the reader forgive them. It's to make the reader understand the exact moment their worldview cracked and something darker filled the gap.

CONTINUE LEARNING
Planning & Structure
Where you design the villain's goals, methods, and thematic relationship to the protagonist
Writing the Draft
Where you calibrate the villain's presence - ensuring they exert pressure even in scenes where they don't appear