Character

Man vs. Nature

/mæn vɜːrsəz ˈneɪ.tʃɚ/ noun
IN ONE SENTENCE

A conflict type where the protagonist struggles against natural forces - storms, wilderness, animals, disease, or the sheer indifference of the physical world.

Definition

Man vs. nature pits a character against the physical world itself. This could mean surviving a hurricane, crossing a desert, fighting off a bear, or battling a pandemic. The key distinction is that nature is not malicious - it has no agenda, no vendetta, no plan. It just is. That indifference is what makes this conflict type so terrifying and so philosophically rich. The character isn't fighting an enemy who can be reasoned with or outsmarted in the traditional sense. They're fighting something that doesn't even know they exist.

Why It Matters

Man vs. nature stories strip characters down to their essentials. When you take away society, technology, and comfort, you find out who someone really is. These conflicts are also a powerful way to explore themes of humility, resilience, and humanity's relationship with the planet - topics that feel increasingly urgent. Plus, survival stakes are primal. Your reader doesn't need backstory to understand why your character doesn't want to freeze to death.

Types of Man vs. Nature

Survival +
Natural Disaster +
Animal Antagonist +
Disease and Plague +

Famous Examples

The Old Man and the Sea — Ernest Hemingway

Santiago's three-day battle with a giant marlin is man vs. nature in its most iconic form - one human, one fish, the open ocean, and nothing else.

Into the Wild — Jon Krakauer

Chris McCandless walks into the Alaskan wilderness seeking transcendence and discovers that nature doesn't care about your idealism. A true story that reads like a cautionary fable.

The Martian — Andy Weir

Mark Watney is stranded on Mars and must science his way to survival. The planet isn't trying to kill him - it just has no oxygen, no water pressure, and no food. Same difference.

Piranesi — Susanna Clarke

The protagonist navigates a vast, flooding house-world where tides and weather patterns are both beautiful and deadly - nature as mystery rather than enemy.

Common Mistakes

Making nature feel like a sentient villain

The storm isn't angry at your character. The ocean isn't punishing them. Nature's power comes from its indifference. Keep it impersonal and it'll be far scarier.

Forgetting the internal conflict

A character running from a bear for 300 pages gets boring fast. The external survival struggle should mirror or trigger an internal one - fear, guilt, regret, transformation.

Getting the science or geography wrong

Readers who know wilderness, weather, or biology will lose trust if you get details wrong. Research your setting thoroughly, or lean into the fantastical and make it clear you're not going for realism.

Try It Yourself

Quick Exercise

Drop your character into a natural environment that wants to kill them - a blizzard, a desert, a flooding river. Write 400 words where they must solve one immediate survival problem using only what they have on them right now. Focus on sensory details: what do they feel, hear, smell? Make the reader shiver or sweat.

CONTINUE LEARNING
Writing the Draft
When drafting man vs. nature scenes, lean into sensory detail to make the environment feel like a character in its own right - something the reader can feel pressing in on them.