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Flashback

/ˈflæʃbæk/ noun
IN ONE SENTENCE

A scene that jumps backward in time to show the reader something that happened before the story's present moment.

Definition

A flashback interrupts the current timeline of your story to show an event from the past. It is a way to deliver backstory dramatically rather than through exposition or summary. When done well, a flashback feels earned and essential. When done poorly, it feels like the author hitting pause on the interesting stuff to explain things.

Why It Matters

Flashbacks let you reveal character history, motivation, and trauma at the exact moment that information hits hardest. Instead of front-loading a character's entire backstory in chapter one, you can drop it in right when the reader needs it most. But they are tricky - a poorly placed flashback can kill your momentum, so you need to know when and how to use them.

Types of Flashback

Full-scene flashback +
Brief flash +
Triggered flashback +
Structural flashback +

Famous Examples

The Kite Runner — Khaled Hosseini

The novel opens with an adult Amir, then spends most of its first half in an extended flashback to his childhood. The flashback works because it makes everything in the present-day story hit harder.

Lost (TV series) — J.J. Abrams, Damon Lindelof, Jeffrey Lieber

Lost built its entire structure around character-centric flashbacks, using each episode's flashback to illuminate present-day conflicts and deepen character understanding.

The God of Small Things — Arundhati Roy

Roy weaves past and present together in a nonlinear pattern, with flashbacks revealing the tragedy at the story's center in fragments that slowly click into place.

Common Mistakes

Flashbacks that dump information the reader does not care about yet

Make the reader curious about the past before you show it. If they are not already asking 'what happened?', a flashback will feel like an interruption.

Confusing transitions between past and present

Use clear signals when entering and exiting a flashback. A shift in tense, a sensory trigger, or a scene break can all help the reader follow the timeline.

Using flashbacks as a crutch to avoid writing scenes in the present

If your flashbacks are more interesting than your present-day story, consider whether the flashback timeline should be your actual story instead.

Try It Yourself

Quick Exercise

Write a present-day scene where a character is cleaning out a deceased parent's house. Have them find an object that triggers a flashback to a specific childhood memory. Write both the present moment and the flashback, keeping the total under 700 words. Make sure the flashback reveals something that changes how the reader sees the character in the present.

Novelium

Keep Your Timelines Straight

When your story jumps between past and present, Novelium's timeline feature helps you track every flashback and time shift so nothing falls through the cracks.

CONTINUE LEARNING
Planning & Structure
Decide early whether flashbacks will be a structural element of your story or occasional tools. Knowing this shapes how you plan your outline.