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Metaphor

/ˈmet.ə.fɔːr/ noun
IN ONE SENTENCE

Calling something what it isn't to reveal what it really is - a direct comparison without using 'like' or 'as.'

Definition

A metaphor is a figure of speech that describes one thing as if it were something else, drawing a direct equivalence between two unlike things. Unlike a simile, which uses 'like' or 'as' to compare, a metaphor states the comparison outright. When Sylvia Plath writes 'I am a riddle in nine syllables,' she isn't saying she resembles a riddle - she's saying she is one.

Why It Matters

Metaphors are the backbone of vivid writing. They compress complex ideas into images your reader can feel, not just understand. A single strong metaphor can do more emotional work than a paragraph of literal description, and choosing the right metaphors shapes how readers experience your entire world.

Types of Metaphor

Standard (Direct) +
Extended (Conceit) +
Dead Metaphor +
Mixed Metaphor +
Implied Metaphor +

Famous Examples

As You Like It — Shakespeare

"All the world's a stage, and all the men and women merely players" - perhaps the most famous metaphor in English literature, comparing life to theater.

The Great Gatsby — F. Scott Fitzgerald

The green light at the end of Daisy's dock works as an extended metaphor for Gatsby's unreachable dreams and the broader American promise.

Beloved — Toni Morrison

Morrison describes memory as a physical place you can stumble into - 'rememory' as a metaphor for how trauma exists in space, not just time.

Common Mistakes

Mixing metaphors

Pick one comparison and commit to it. 'We need to nip this in the bud before it snowballs' jams gardening and weather together. Choose one.

Relying on cliches

If you've heard the metaphor before, your reader has too. 'Heart of gold' and 'blanket of snow' won't impress anyone. Push for something only you would write.

Over-explaining the comparison

Trust your reader. If you write 'time is a thief' and then spend a paragraph explaining that time steals moments, you're killing the magic. Let the image do its work.

Try It Yourself

Quick Exercise

Pick an emotion you're trying to convey in a current piece. Write ten metaphors for that emotion in five minutes - don't filter, just go. Then circle the one that surprises you most and expand it into a full paragraph of description. Notice how the metaphor gives you concrete images to work with.

CONTINUE LEARNING
Writing the Draft
Where metaphors first appear in your prose
Revision & Editing
Where you sharpen weak metaphors and kill the cliches